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Citizenship in the opening line
[edit]Musicisdeadon, rather than edit war, do you think you could discuss before reverting again? Wodehouse became famous when he was English and spent most of his life writing as an Englishman, writing quintessentially English stories in a very English style. This is all based on the sources which are used in the article. We deal with his US citizenship in a different part of the lead, so it is still mentioned, but is of less importance than the Englishness. As this is an FA which has gone through two community review processes which agreed with the text, maybe discussion rather than trying to force the issue should be your choice of action here. - SchroCat (talk) 17:02, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hi SchroCat
- Please refer to the talk topic "Nationality and Wikipedia’s Manual of Style" on Talk:P._G._Wodehouse for a full outline on this issue. I believe it provides a balanced and comprehensive overview of the factors to consider.
- Apologises for not seeing your talk topic until after I had posted my topic. As you can understand, I was engaged in reviewing the subject and guidelines Musicisdeadon (talk) 22:52, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- Nationality and Wikipedia’s Manual of Style
Hello,
There has been some dispute as to what approach should be taken in describing P.G. Wodehouse's nationality as well as what I believe to be a misunderstanding as to how Wikipedia:Manual of Style describes the approach that should be taken with nationality and lead lines. I was hoping this could be resolved with the note left on the page describing the logic taken, but unfortunately I must elaborate further.
I strongly oppose any and all proposals to change the description of P.G. Wodehouse in the lead of his Wikipedia article from "English and American writer" to solely "English writer." Such a change would be factually misleading and inconsistent with Wikipedia’s Manual of Style (MOS) guidelines on biographical entries. Here are my key reasons for maintaining the description of "English and American writer":
- Consistency with Wikipedia’s Manual of Style (MOS) Guidelines
According to the Manual of Style, particularly MOS:NATIONALITY, biographical entries should provide context that makes the person notable, including a clear reflection of the country or countries where the person was a national or permanent resident when they became notable:
Dual Nationality in Lead Sentences: The MOS suggests using dual nationality in the lead when the individual has significant connections to more than one country. Examples provided by the MOS include Arnold Schwarzenegger ("Austrian and American actor") and Peter Lorre ("Hungarian and American actor"). P.G. Wodehouse fits this model as his career and public identity were significantly tied to both England (where was born and is a citizen) and the United States (where he had permanent residency and later citizenship).
Avoiding Ambiguity: The MOS advises against ambiguity in biographical descriptions. By retaining "English and American writer," the lead remains clear and precise, acknowledging both phases of Wodehouse's career and his dual citizenship. Changing the lead to only "English writer" would be ambiguous and misleading, suggesting his American citizenship and the substantial part of his career in the U.S. were not significant.
- Accurate Representation of his Lifelong American Connection
P.G. Wodehouse was born in England and began his career there, but he later moved to the United States, where he would base himself for a significant and notable part of his career before becoming a naturalised citizen in 1955. His connection to the United States, which includes his dual nationality, is not a trivial aspect of his identity; it is a significant part of his personal and professional life. It is a key part of what makes him notable.
Many of Wodehouse's most notable works were authored, published, and/or serialised in the United States first, some never published in Britain in his lifetime. This is particularly true of his post-war era where he was a controversial figure in the UK. Many of his well-known stories first appeared in American publications such as The Saturday Evening Post. Wodehouse was a figure of note in the early development of the Broadway Musical and, while less notable, briefly worked for MGM in what was considered it's golden age.
Wodehouse's naturalisation as an American citizen marked an important chapter in his life, while it was late in his life it still provided context for his life-long connection to the US as well as many of the events preceding his naturalisation. It is essential to recognise this citizenship in the lead as it is a key part to understanding the subject. To omit this and describe him solely as "English" would ignore the complexity and the significance of the American phase of his life and would fail to capture the full scope of his career and contributions to both English and American literary traditions.
- Relevance of Nationality Over Cultural Perception
While some may perceive Wodehouse’s work as "quintessentially English," this is a cultural characterisation and not a reflection of his nationality or the full breadth of his career:
Nationality is a factual and legal status, while terms like "quintessentially English" are subjective and refer to a style or cultural perception. Wodehouse’s style may reflect certain British sensibilities, but this does not negate his American citizenship or his significant contributions to American culture. For example, J.R.R. Tolkien is not described as "Elvish" simply because his work, The Silmarillion, deeply explores Elvish culture; similarly, Wodehouse’s "English" style does not preclude him from being accurately described as an "English and American writer."
- The Naturalisation Itself is Context for Understanding His Life and Work
P.G. Wodehouse's naturalisation provides critical context for understanding several key events in his life:
His well-documented issues around citizenship, visas, and taxes significant role in his later life. This includes his time as an tax exile, his wartime internment, the circumstances in which he came to make his controversial broadcasts during World War II, and the British government’s considerations surrounding his knighthood. His eventually naturalisation, while late in his life, are effectively the "final chapter" of these long-running problems that ultimately lead to the downfall of his career. Therefore the American citizenship and naturalisation itself are essential for readers to understand his biography in context.
- Conclusion
Wodehouse’s work and life in the United States solidifies his identity as an "American writer" alongside being an "English writer." This dual contribution to both English and American entertainment and culture should be accurately reflected in the lead. As per MOS:NATIONALITY biographical entries should provide context that makes the person notable, including a clear reflection of the country or countries where the person was a national or **permanent resident** (emphasis added) when they became notable. Therefore it would be remiss to categorise Wodehouse in the opening line as solely an "English writer" just in the same way it would be remiss to categorise him solely as an "American" writer.
Changing P.G. Wodehouse's description to only "English writer" would misrepresent a significant part of his career and life spent in the United States. The current description of "English and American writer" is accurate, adheres to Wikipedia's Manual of Style guidelines, and provides readers with a comprehensive understanding of his identity and contributions.
While some might disagree, it is clear to me that the obvious approach to take is to keep the lead line as "English and American writer" unless a compelling reason can be made to divert from the what MOS:NATIONALITY clearly outlines.
I urge fellow editors to not let emotional or romantic rhetoric about who Wodehouse "ought to be" influence them into supporting a less accurate description. At best describing him solely as English is a highly misleading but innocent error, at worse it is nationalist editing.
Thank you for your attention, I apologise for styling errors as this is not my strong suit.
Musicisdeadon (talk) 22:47, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe read Wikipedia:Wall of text and realise that ‘less is more’ is an excellent way to approach leaving comments. It’s late, so I’ll leave more substantive comments in the morning, but you should note that edit warring on an FA and against the explicit consensus not just of the talk page, but two community review processes is looked upon badly. I strongly suggest you discuss the matter rather than edit war. This is in line with WP:BRD and WP:STATUS QUO. - SchroCat (talk) 23:38, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly, there is already a consensus (through two community review processes), that the current wording is appropriate. You talk about not wanting to change it to ‘English writer’, but that’s what the consensus already is. What you are trying to do is change it from English writer, and for that you need a new consensus. This is not done through you edit warring your preferred version, but by discussion.Secondly, you need to understand that the MOS is a series of guidelines, inherently flexible, and to be used with common sense and flexibility. They are not a series of rules or diktats to be slavishly adhered to without thought. Wodehouse is one of those where common sense shows us the right path to take. You point out in your over-long comment that the MOS says “biographical entries should provide context that makes the person notable, including a clear reflection of the country or countries where the person was a national or permanent resident when they became notable”: for Wodehouse that would not be the US, but the UK, where he became notable some fifty years before his American citizenship.There is no doubt that he held American citizenship, and it is something that is already covered within the lead in an appropriate place. His citizenship, however, had no bearing on his output or style, which was still resolutely English in manner, style and form. (Some of your arguments on publication locations are either straw men, or are just untrue, by the way). You said in one edit summary that “Wikipedia is not "vibes based"”; that is true, although no-one was claiming it was. What Wikipedia is, is sources based, and the sources—while never denying he held dual citizenship at the end of his life—heavily stress Wodehouse’s Englishness. A few examples:
- “Wodehouse was a great writer of English prose, and the greatest of all English humorists.” (DNB)
- 1975, described as "the solitary surviving English literary comic genius" (The Guardian)
- Same year, same paper: “one, if not more than one, of England's greatest men”.
- I could start going through the biographies and dig out a few dozen more such examples if needed, but given we already cover Wodehouse’s US citizenship in the lead, and in a more appropriate context, I’m not sure any more will be necessary. - SchroCat (talk) 02:42, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- What a fuss about nothing! Wodehouse was throughout his life English. So far as citizenship is concerned he was a lifelong British subject and he took joint US citizenship after the war. The present text is ideal, which is no doubt why more than a dozen contributions to the peer review and FAC raised no objection on this point. The very header to this thread is based on a misconception: England is not an independent country and one cannot either become or stop being English, any more than one can become or stop being Welsh or Scottish. This is nothing at all to do with citizenship. I hope this is the last we shall hear of this irrelevant nonsense. Tim riley talk 13:53, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- I agree Tim riley, it's unfortunate to see continued misunderstandings about citizenship and nationality continue. I had actually used a different header but unfortunately somebody merged our talks into SchroCat's less accurate header.
- As you've noted, Wodehouse was certainly English by birth and cultural identity, but this doesn't negate the fact that he had a significant connection to the United States that was eventually solidified by his naturalisation. This has been noted by his biographers. To counter misunderstanding, I must emphasise the core of my argument. The description as "English and American" accurately captures the full scope of Wodehouse's life and contributions to both country's rich literary traditions. It's not about changing nationality or citizenship definitions; it's about ensuring we provide a complete picture of his life to our readers. See my main reply to SchroCat for more details.
- You raise an interesting point about peer review and FAC which I admit at first is persuasive, but lets keep focus of the fact that even peer review and FAC are not infallible, furthermore both took place nearly a decade ago. There has been a continued evolved understanding of nationality, the guidelines, and even Wodehouse since then. To my understanding as no objection was raised during FAC or PR it could simply be the case that it was an oversight and that if the FAC or PR had flagged it they likely would have came to the conclusion describing him as "English" exclusively is the wrong approach.
- Musicisdeadon (talk) 14:50, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
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I had actually used a different header
”: actually you used six headers, all of which are still in place, as it’s ridiculous to open a second new thread on the same subject, let alone six new threads. I’ll also repeat the advice that you read and take on board WP:WALLOFTEXT and strongly advise you to read it, and reduce your posts to manageable lengths, not force other people to waste their time going through long screeds of repetitive text. – SchroCat (talk) 18:43, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
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- Hello SchroCat,
- Thank you for taking the time to provide a detailed response and for outlining your perspective on this matter. I appreciate your commitment to maintaining the quality of the article and to ensuring that Wikipedia adheres to both its guidelines and its community consensus.
- Firstly, I want to clarify that I am not engaging in an edit war, nor is that my intention. I am here to engage in a good faith discussion to ensure that the article reflects an accurate and comprehensive portrayal of P.G. Wodehouse's life and work, which I believe is in the best interest of Wikipedia's readers. In fact your editing and approach had been very disruptive, overbearing, and itself characteristic of an edit war. I hope I do not have to report this behaviour.
- Regarding the consensus you mention, you claim there may have been prior community review processes and consensuses on this matter, but from what I can see this is not the case. The last peer review was nearly a decade ago when the MOS guidance this area was very different. Furthermore, this is the first time I'm hearing about them in our recent exchanges. Could you please provide the specific links or references to these reviews so that I and other interested editors can better understand the basis for this alleged current consensus? It is important that all participants in this discussion have access to the same information and context.
- On the matter of the Manual of Style (MOS), I fully agree that it is a set of guidelines intended to be applied with flexibility and common sense. However, I believe the guidelines also provide a clear framework for ensuring articles are comprehensive and balanced. The MOS suggests that nationality should be contextualized in terms of the person's notability, and I think it's crucial to recognize that Wodehouse's American citizenship and his significant literary contributions while residing in the U.S. are notable aspects of his life and career. These aspects do not negate his English heritage or the primary identification of his work with English culture, but they do add important context that should not be overlooked.
- I believe there is a misunderstanding in your response, particularly in your emphasis on the precise timing of Wodehouse's American citizenship. While it's accurate that Wodehouse was only naturalised as a U.S. citizen in 1955, the more relevant point to this discussion is that he enjoyed a substantial and enduring connection to the United States, where he spent several decades as a permanent resident. Some academics estimate he actually spent more of his adult life in the US than the UK. His work during this extensive period in the U.S. is a major component of what makes him notable, which justifies including "American" in the description. The acquisition of citizenship in 1955 merely formalised a long-standing affiliation with the United States, rather than marking its beginning.
- There are numerous examples on Wikipedia of individuals being described by nationalities they never formally held as citizenship or only held citizenship for a small part of their long connection to the US. For instance, George Washington is unequivocally described as "American," even though legally he only had U.S. citizenship for the last nine to ten years of his life. This is because his identity and contributions are fundamentally tied to the United States. Similarly, John Oliver, another "quintessentially English" humourist whose humour is deeply rooted in his English style, is described as "British and American" in the lead line of his featured article. Even though Oliver has only been an American citizen for the past five years of his almost 50-year life and 30-year career, this description recognises his long-term connection to the U.S. and his significant career there. The reasoning for recognising Wodehouse as "English and American" is comparable.
- As you pointed out, Wodehouse became notable in the UK before acquiring American citizenship, which is an important factor. However, I believe that his later life and works in the U.S., as well as his naturalisation as an American citizen, are also significant and contribute to his overall notability and identity. The authors of the examples you provided from the Dictionary of National Biography (DNB) and The Guardian (interestingly, two British publications) choose to emphasise his Englishness, which is undoubtedly a key part of his identity, but this does not necessarily preclude also identifying him as having a significant connection to the United States, especially given his American citizenship and his notable period living and working there.
- For example famed Wodehouse biographer Robert McCrum whose biography of Wodehouse is a key source in this very article described Wodehouse as follows:
- “On a strict calculation of the time Wodehouse eventually spent in the United States, and the lyrics, books, stories, plays and films he wrote there, to say nothing of his massive dollar income, he should be understood as an American and a British writer" - Source (pdf link)
- This is a view he elaborated on in Slate magazine - https://slate.com/culture/2002/04/p-g-wodehouse-s-secret-life-as-a-yank.html where he reasons that Wodehouse is deeply intertwined with both British and American cultures, making him a more transatlantic figure than commonly believed.
- McCrum is not the sole holder of this view. Similar views can be found published in the:
- Boston Globe - "P.G. Wodehouse’s language is as American as it is British"
- The Guardian - " So the truth about Wodehouse is that, in his professional life, he was very much an American."
- Jstor Daily - "Key to P.G. Wodehouse’s continuing appeal, says Karle, is that he made of America what he made of England"
- Regarding your point about the relevance of his American citizenship to his output or style, while his style remained rooted in English humour, his career in the United States—his engagement with American media, his publications there, and his involvement with American culture contributed to his cross-broader status as a writer. Furthermore many, including McCrum, have pointed out the American influence in his writing. The lead sentence of an article should aim to provide a holistic view that encompasses the full scope of an individual's life and career.
- There are countless authors who blend cross-cultural styles and the influence from their heritage in the US literary tradition. Ezra Pound did not loose their status as an American poet by rooting their work in Chinese traditions. T.S. Eliot (described by Britannica as an American-English poet) was not any less of a British poet for being influenced by his American roots, Leonard Cohen did not loose his Canadian or American status for being in touch with his Greek Orthodox Jewish roots. I would urge you to ensure that you are not falling victim to an implicit Wikipedia:Systemic bias simply due to the fact that Wodehouse's country of origin is an old world white country and therefore his birth nationality could never be displaced.
- I am advocating for a lead that reflects both his English roots and his American ties. This approach aligns with Wikipedia's goal to provide a balanced and informative overview of notable figures. I believe that describing Wodehouse as an "English and American writer" provides a more comprehensive picture of his dual identity and diverse career.
- Focusing solely on his English identity or the exact date of his American citizenship risks oversimplifying and misrepresenting the breadth of Wodehouse's life and career, which includes significant achievements and influences while he was a resident and later a citizen of the United States. Describing him as both "English and American" is not only accurate but also provides a fuller understanding of his dual cultural legacy.
- I am open to further discussion and hope we can reach a consensus that best serves our readers and adheres to Wikipedia's guidelines. Thank you again for your input and for your dedication to maintaining the quality of this important article.
- Musicisdeadon (talk) 14:35, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- What a fuss about nothing! Wodehouse was throughout his life English. So far as citizenship is concerned he was a lifelong British subject and he took joint US citizenship after the war. The present text is ideal, which is no doubt why more than a dozen contributions to the peer review and FAC raised no objection on this point. The very header to this thread is based on a misconception: England is not an independent country and one cannot either become or stop being English, any more than one can become or stop being Welsh or Scottish. This is nothing at all to do with citizenship. I hope this is the last we shall hear of this irrelevant nonsense. Tim riley talk 13:53, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Courtesy break
[edit]- God in Heaven! Have we got to be subjected to further avalanches of logorrhoea from this one editor? I repeat, as I said earlier, What a fuss about nothing! Wodehouse was throughout his life English. So far as citizenship is concerned he was a lifelong British subject and he took joint US citizenship after the war. The present text is ideal, which is no doubt why more than a dozen contributions to the peer review and FAC raised no objection on this point. ... England is not an independent country and one cannot either become or stop being English, any more than one can become or stop being Welsh or Scottish. This is nothing at all to do with citizenship. I hope this is the last we shall hear of this irrelevant nonsense, though given the dogmatic scribaciousness of this one editor I doubt if we shall be so lucky. Tim riley talk 15:29, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- I couldn’t agree more. We describe in the lead Wodehouse’s US interaction and citizenship extensively in the second and third paragraphs, and do so with the context and detail that gives readers a much more complete picture than just adding the word ‘American’ to the opening line. The focus on cluttering the opening line with something no-one has mentioned, let alone complained about, over the last nine years seems odd to say the least.Despite the rather desperate attempts to claim otherwise, Wodehouse’s notability has no connection to his citizenship. Absolutely none. Musicisdeadon’s comments in the fourth and fifth paragraphs above seem to suggest we make no reference to any American connection, which is just plain untrue.It’s about as untruthful as Musicisdeadon’s claims about my supposed behaviour; please feel free to go ahead and report me, I won’t be bullied by people throwing around such laughable threats (can I suggest you open a thread at WP:ANI, which would be the most suitable). I await your opening of the thread there. - SchroCat (talk) 19:02, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- Wholly agree. I had no idea that scribaciousness was a real word. Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 20:58, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- God in Heaven! Have we got to be subjected to further avalanches of logorrhoea from this one editor? I repeat, as I said earlier, What a fuss about nothing! Wodehouse was throughout his life English. So far as citizenship is concerned he was a lifelong British subject and he took joint US citizenship after the war. The present text is ideal, which is no doubt why more than a dozen contributions to the peer review and FAC raised no objection on this point. ... England is not an independent country and one cannot either become or stop being English, any more than one can become or stop being Welsh or Scottish. This is nothing at all to do with citizenship. I hope this is the last we shall hear of this irrelevant nonsense, though given the dogmatic scribaciousness of this one editor I doubt if we shall be so lucky. Tim riley talk 15:29, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Earls
[edit]- The Wodehouses, who traced their ancestry back to the 13th century, belonged to a cadet branch of the family of the earls of Kimberley.
Does this language imply that Plum descended from the first earl? Their last common (patrilineal) ancestor was three or four generations before the earldom was created, iirc. —Tamfang (talk) 20:36, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- No. It means what it says. PGW was from a cadet branch of the family; he was not descended from the first earl (cr 1866). He was descended from the fifth baronet, Sir Armine Wodehouse, through the latter's younger son the Rev Philip Wodehouse, his son Colonel Philip Wodehouse, and his son Ernest Wodehouse, PGW's father. PGW could theoretically have inherited the baronetcy had there been enough premature and/or sonless deaths in the family. Geoffrey Jaggard (1967, p. 190) writes "P.G.'s branch is a cadet of the heritable Earldom of Kimberley, and ... he is in line of succession to that title, as well as to the still older baronetcy which it embraces" though I imagine that would have required deaths of intervening kinsmen on a Kind Hearts and Coronets scale. Tim riley talk 08:35, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
- Jaggard would appear to be mistaken, unless there is a special remainder (rare, and not mentioned in the Kimberley article) to heirs of the first earl's ancestors. —Tamfang (talk) 04:03, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
- Mildly interesting but somewhat beside the point. The original statement stands. Tim riley talk 08:45, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
- Jaggard would appear to be mistaken, unless there is a special remainder (rare, and not mentioned in the Kimberley article) to heirs of the first earl's ancestors. —Tamfang (talk) 04:03, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
Edit warring
[edit]IP, Could you please stop edit warring and discuss your proposed changes. Further reverting could see you being reported at the relevant noticeboard. - SchroCat (talk) 21:16, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
- I hope that this appeal will be successful, but I fear this anonymous contributor has no interest in Wikipedia's rules or practices and suffers from the delusion that s/he knows better than everyone else. We may simply have to keep reverting shoddy edits until s/he loses interest and goes away to vandalise other articles. Tim riley talk 21:24, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
Emsworth
[edit]The inspiration for the name Lord Emsworth was the village of Emsworth which was close to PG's heart. Yet there seems to be no mention of Emsworth ot its importance to PG. I would like to rectify this with the following text, citing Robert McRum's biography.
===Emsworth===
The coastal village of Emsworth in West Sussex was to become a very special place for Wodehouse. He first went there in 1903 at the invitation of his friend Herbert Westbrook. Westbrook was a schoolmaster with literary aspirations who taught at Emsworth House school where Wodehouse initially lived in a room above the stables. The surprising move from London is explained by Wodehouse's life-long love of rural seclusion. [1]. In 1904 Wodehouse rented a house called Threepwood, adjoining Emsworth House, where he stayed on and off from 1904 to 1914. His housekeeper at Threepwood was Lillian 'Lily' Barnett with whom he would develop a lifelong friendship, and to whom he expressed the intense happiness he always felt about Emsworth. [2]. In later life, Wodehouse often stayed at Emsworth House, usually on the way to one of his habitual New York liner crossings from Southampton. [3]. Wodehouse frequently named his characters after places he knew well, with Lord Emsworth as a prime example. Threepwood became the family name of Lord Emsworth. Other Emsworth-related characters include Lord Emsworth's heir, Viscount Bosham, and Lord Stockheath. Wodehouse and Emsworth (talk) 16:05, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
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- Let me explain as gently as I can how Wikipedia works. Editors gather and sift their material, concentrating on the essentials and resisting the temptation to stray into interesting but inessential byways. The result, if we do our jobs well, is what we term a Featured Article, reviewed by fellow Wikipedia contributors and judged to be examples of the best Wikipedia articles. Wodehouse here has 8,700 words, which is considerably more than the Oxford Dictionary of National Biography gives him, but very, very considerably less than the full-length biographies by Jasen (294 pages), Donaldson (399 pages) or McCrum (530 pages). The main editors of this article have striven to present the key facts about Wodehouse's life and works, and although what you say in your proposed addition is perfectly true, this is what Usborne says on the same point (p. 115):
- Emsworth is, in fact, a town on the border of Sussex and Hampshire, in a district rich in place-names that have acquired glory in song or legend. Hilaire Belloc's Ha'naker and Duncton Hill are near by, and Wodehouse has taken from the villages of Bosham and Warblington names for Lord Emsworth's heir (Lord Bosham) and one of his many sisters (Lady Ann Warblington).
- This is fine – very fine – in a full-length book, but it would be excessive in an 8,700-word encyclopaedia article, as I fear your paragraph would also be. I hope this explains why the regular editors of the article have resisted the addition. Tim riley talk 17:35, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
- I don't understand your description of the importance of Emsworth to Wodehouse as an 'inessential byway'. He certainly would not regard it as such. Quite the reverse. His affection for the place tells us much about the man and surely has a place in his wiki biography. Such was the importance of Emsworth in his life that there are plans afoot to erect a statue of him in the village. The sculptor would be Philip Jackson, a world class artist responsible for many public monuments like the young Mozart in Belgravia and Mahatma Gandhi in Parliament Square. I would argue that my entry adds an important dimension to PG's page. I respectfully hope you will reconsider. 2A00:23C8:3E86:5501:2025:5FBC:E69B:317 (talk) 21:14, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
- Like Tim, I think this is too detailed for this short encyclopaedic biography (I note that neither the ODNB nor the Encyclopaedia Britannica make space for it in their entries). Fine for full-length biographies, not notable enough for a summary of his life. - SchroCat (talk) 21:32, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
- That is a courteous response, for which I thank you. Wikipedia works by consensus, and if you can gather a consensus to include your paragraph, so be it. For my own part I think the suggested addition is not really core material, for the reasons I have stated, and I'm asking the other major contributor to the article, SchroCat, to comment. Tim riley talk 21:40, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
- I accept the point that my entry was too long and detailed. But I would argue that PG's deep affection for Emsworth is not just another fact. It surely contributes to our understanding of the great man. And the fact that Emsworth inspired the name of some of his characters is surely significant. Please will you consider this severely edited version of what I originally suggested, which is now a mere 71 words.
- ===Emsworth===
- In 1904 Wodehouse rented a house called Threepwood in the coastal village of Emsworth where he stayed on and off until 1914. Emsworth suited his love of rural seclusion [1] and brought him intense happiness. [2] It also inspired the names of some of his characters, with Lord Emsworth as a prime example. Threepwood became the family name of Lord Emsworth. Other Emsworth-related characters include Lord Emsworth's heir, Viscount Bosham, and Lord Stockheath. Wodehouse and Emsworth (talk) 10:33, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- I don't understand your description of the importance of Emsworth to Wodehouse as an 'inessential byway'. He certainly would not regard it as such. Quite the reverse. His affection for the place tells us much about the man and surely has a place in his wiki biography. Such was the importance of Emsworth in his life that there are plans afoot to erect a statue of him in the village. The sculptor would be Philip Jackson, a world class artist responsible for many public monuments like the young Mozart in Belgravia and Mahatma Gandhi in Parliament Square. I would argue that my entry adds an important dimension to PG's page. I respectfully hope you will reconsider. 2A00:23C8:3E86:5501:2025:5FBC:E69B:317 (talk) 21:14, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
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- The second half of this is unsourced and cannot go in, and I'm still not sure the first part is encyclopaedic (having affection for something doesn't normally reach the level for inclusion in an encyclopaedia). - SchroCat (talk) 10:42, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- The Wikipedia entry for Lord Emsworth confirms the second half of my entry. If it was ok to go in there why not here? I'm new to all this, so would appreciate your patience. PG's love for Emsworth is a proven fact, so why can't something so important to our understanding of the man not be included? Wodehouse and Emsworth (talk) 11:23, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- In an article on, say, Romeo and Juliet you would expect to see that it is set in Verona, but you wouldn't expect to see it in the article on Shakespeare. What is proportionate and appropriate for one article is not necessarily so for another. See my explanation, above: editors gather and sift their material, concentrating on the essentials and resisting the temptation to stray into interesting but inessential byways. What the Rev Francis Heppenstall in "The Great Sermon Handicap" calls "the rather exhaustive excursus" is to be avoided, and I fear that the use of the place names from Emsworth and environs is in that category so far as a Life-and-Works encyclopaedia article is concerned. Not only do the ODNB and Britannica articles on Wodehouse omit mention of the place names, so too do The Oxford Encyclopedia of British Literature, Richard Voorhees in his 200-page study of Wodehouse and R. D. B. French in his 120-page study. Tim riley talk 12:27, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- Would this be acceptable? It could be accompanied by a photo of the blue plaque on the side of Threepwood stating that he lived there from 1904 – 1914.
- ===Emsworth===
- In 1904 Wodehouse rented a house called Threepwood in the coastal village of Emsworth where he stayed on and off until 1914. It inspired the names of some of his characters, with Lord Emsworth as a prime example. Wodehouse and Emsworth (talk) 13:26, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- In an article on, say, Romeo and Juliet you would expect to see that it is set in Verona, but you wouldn't expect to see it in the article on Shakespeare. What is proportionate and appropriate for one article is not necessarily so for another. See my explanation, above: editors gather and sift their material, concentrating on the essentials and resisting the temptation to stray into interesting but inessential byways. What the Rev Francis Heppenstall in "The Great Sermon Handicap" calls "the rather exhaustive excursus" is to be avoided, and I fear that the use of the place names from Emsworth and environs is in that category so far as a Life-and-Works encyclopaedia article is concerned. Not only do the ODNB and Britannica articles on Wodehouse omit mention of the place names, so too do The Oxford Encyclopedia of British Literature, Richard Voorhees in his 200-page study of Wodehouse and R. D. B. French in his 120-page study. Tim riley talk 12:27, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- The Wikipedia entry for Lord Emsworth confirms the second half of my entry. If it was ok to go in there why not here? I'm new to all this, so would appreciate your patience. PG's love for Emsworth is a proven fact, so why can't something so important to our understanding of the man not be included? Wodehouse and Emsworth (talk) 11:23, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- The second half of this is unsourced and cannot go in, and I'm still not sure the first part is encyclopaedic (having affection for something doesn't normally reach the level for inclusion in an encyclopaedia). - SchroCat (talk) 10:42, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
- You write, "having affection for something doesn't normally reach the level for inclusion in an encyclopaedia." And yet, re-reading his entry, these examples have been admitted.
- "Wodehouse spent happy teenage years at Dulwich College, to which he remained devoted all his life." "Wodehouse's six years at Dulwich were among the happiest of his life." "In April he sailed to New York, which he found greatly to his liking."
- Why is stating he loved Emsworth any different to saying he loved Dulwich or New York? Please reconsider. Wodehouse and Emsworth (talk) 15:05, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
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